Samantha Thiele

Short, sweet, to the point. Only problem is I feel like this is missing something. This almost feels like a single verse rather than an entire poem. There are three ...

Short, sweet and to the point. Though to make it a top rank poem ,you might want to add a little to it. To say the truth there isn't much ...

This poem has nice imagery, an it shouldn't matter whether it's religous or not. I for one tend to enjoy all potry no matter why it was written, or what ...

Vampires am I correct? Haha. You've caught my attention! Though to be dreadfully honest it doesn't fit as a creepy poem. (It could just be me, I'm really hard to ...

The point is clear....And I'm actually glad it doesn't ryme. I can't stress how bothersome it is when people asume because it's a poem it has to ryme. (Cruse mother ...

This is very descriptive and the wording is nice. And about this not fitting under poetry, and to a point I agree. but that shouldn't stop you from formating it ...

This is a nice poem, but to be truely contructive I have to comment that the last lines don't really flow with the rest. It's clear that your trying, and ...